Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 

Sing Me Your Story by ~westpenta:iconwestpenta:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed




Sing to me
as silence rings
see in time
what darkness brings
while they’re all dead
and no one cares
of the blood and pain
that shouldn’t be there.
There lies a story
that’s never been told
left haunting in the shadows
and shivering cold.
It whispers you secrets
of pain and ache
its things you can’t hear,
things you can’t take.
It’s horribly silent
but you can’t shake the sound
of the dead as they screamed
and never were found.
Sing your story
tell me what’s pain
haunt me with secrets
that will make me insane.
©2006-2009 ~westpenta
:iconwestpenta:

Author's Comments

I don't remember when I wrote this. There is something I like about it. I'm not sure what it is, thus I'm not sure were to put this.



....................live for the beauty......................

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconshachiel:
~Shachiel Jul 20, 2006, 12:14:15 PM
Hey! That's my eye!!!

I really liked this one :)... quite dark actually

--
It smells like dust and moonlight...
---
I miss you
:iconwestpenta:
~westpenta Jul 20, 2006, 7:17:44 PM
yes it is, I thought it worked perfectly with this peice. I really should have asked you permission before using it. I'm sorry that I didn't, I hope it's ok.

--
-------+------
Carpe Diem
-------+------
:iconshachiel:
~Shachiel Jul 20, 2006, 7:35:41 PM
Yup, don't worry, it's a honor to see my eye as a image for such a beutiful piece :)

--
It smells like dust and moonlight...
---
I miss you
:iconbeached-whale:
~beached-whale Jul 25, 2006, 9:25:29 PM
i really like this like wow.....the eye fits well too
this is just wow really wow i dont know what else to say

--
take a deep breath and jump :ahoy:

-your captain
:iconlittle-eekie:
~little-eekie Jul 30, 2006, 7:38:37 PM
*claps* i liked

--
I like your Christ. I do not like your Christians. Your Christians are so unlike your Christ.
- Mohandas Gandhi
:iconinfiniteshadow:
~InfiniteShadow Jan 29, 2008, 9:24:45 AM
It's as though you're telling people that you want to be their guardian of sorts.

Tell me your lie, get it off your chest, and I'll keep it safe for you, and take the pain for you.

That sorta thing. That sounds like me kind of.

--
:sarcasm: :evillaugh: :sniff: :no: :w00t: :shakefist: :sarcasticclap: :shrug: :boogie: :bow: ^^; :dance: :sing: :faint: :clap: :lmao: :giggle: :O_o: :disbelief:
Previous PageNext Page

Details

July 19, 2006
753 bytes
182 KB
800×600

Statistics

6
3 [who?]
61 (0 today)
4 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map

©2009 deviantART. All rights reserved
About Us | Contact Us | Site Tour | Help & FAQ Advertise | Services Etiquette | Privacy Policy | Terms of Service | Copyright Policy