They’re unreachable here
with the sound in their ears
the beat takes control
grips them by the soul
they’re a slave to it all
so dizzy they’ll fall
they sway their hips
and tighten their grips
on the hand that they hold
watch as they both unfold
they let themselves go
just to go with the flow
their breaking the rules
forgetting their cool
all they know is the beat
that pounds down to their feet
all they know is the sound
that knocks them to the ground.
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I went to a rock concert last weekend, it was awesome. My best girl Jillian and I were dancing all night, just rocking out. It was really funny because we were the only ones dancing and we weren't regulars, so we felt a little out of place. The last band we saw was Fades To Grey, in our opinion they rocked the hardest. It wasn't long after they started playing that we started headbanging and thats what this poem is about. It was so exhilarating, we had to hold hands to stay standing. When it was over, I couldn't walk. I was literally knocked to the ground by it. my neck hurt for days.
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